bowling invite wording

[littlesista06]

I'm off to a pretty good start, but it could use some tweaking. Any thoughts?


Got time to “spare”?

Come celebrate ______’s 11th Birthday
Saturday, February 24, 2007

Meet at our house at nine that night
We’ll go Cosmic Bowling ‘til late in the night
It’s glow in the dark fun for every one
Don’t miss out, come on and come!

Then back to our house, and tucked in tight,
Where we’ll all sleep away, what’s left of the night.

Sleep late on Sunday, we’ll fix you brunch,
Tell mom & dad they can kick back, too
Say, “Pick me up later, in time for lunch”.

Give us a call, give us a shout
We can’t party without you, so don’t be left out.

[AnnW]

cute!!!!

i would change this line

Sleep late on Sunday, we’ll fix you brunch,
Tell mom & dad they can kick back, too
Say, “Pick me up later, in time for lunch”.

to

Sleep late on Sunday, we’ll fix you brunch,
Mom & dad can pick you up in time for lunch”.

[littlesista06]

I think I like this even better:


Got time to “spare”?

Come celebrate ______’s 11th Birthday
Saturday, February 24, 2007

Meet at our house at nine that night
We’ll go Cosmic Bowling ‘til late in the night
It’s glow in the dark fun for everyone
Don’t miss out, come on and come!

Then it’s back to our house
and tucked in tight
Where we’ll all sleep away…
what’s left of the night.

We’ll sleep late on Sunday
then fix you brunch
You can get picked up later,
In time for lunch

Give us a call, give us a shout
We can’t party without you
so don’t be left out.

[KarlaB]

LOVE it!!! Next time I need something clever and creative you'll be hearing from me!! :D How fun!!

[AnnW]

perfect!!

now make up a cute one for dd's 13th luau party! pretty please :)

[littlesista06]

perfect!!

now make up a cute one for dd's 13th luau party! pretty please :)

D@mn!! I wish you'd said something earlier. I JUST threw out a copy of the invite I did for dd's last year. I'll see if I can remember it or if it's on my computer upstairs.

I know it had stuff like:
Grass skirts, Island shirts
Tropical drinks and (something I can't remember) too
Yes, a luau's in store for you!

Come "hang ten" at _____'s 13th birthday party

Surf's up at __ o'clock

[KarlaB]

Did you ever post the Luau wording for us here?

[KarlaB]

Just found it!! :)

Grass skirts, Loud Shirts
Torch lights, and Island delights
These things and more, it’s true...
A Luau is in store for you!
Join us as we celebrate...

[littlesista06]

darn girl, you're good!!! ROFL
see, it pays to talk about myself and what i'm up to. hee hee!

[littlesista06]

so, what else can we do for you, ann?

anyone else having a party? :lol:

[AnnW]

Rofl!!!!!!!!!

[Diane]

Well... I'm just terrible at wording... so if I ever need any help I'll certainly know where to come. :) You guy's are awesome! :)

[littlesista06]

I'm still playing with it. ROFL


Got time to “Spare”?
This may be right up your “ally“…

Come celebrate ______ turning eleven
February 24, 2007

Meet at our house at nine that night
We’ll go Cosmic Bowling ‘til late in the night
There’s music and black lights and glow in the dark pins
What’s more fun than bowling with friends?!

Then it’s back to our house to get tucked in tight…
We’ll all sleep away what’s left of the night.
Let’s get up late Sunday, then fix some brunch
You can be picked up later, In time for your lunch.

Give us a call, give us a shout
We can’t party without you,
so don’t be left out!

[MaryL]

Adorable!!! :thumb:

[AnnW]

too cute!

btw..i fixed your typo..just couldn't look at "bowing" any longer! ;)

[Melody]

Love it! :)

[littlesista06]

Oh thanks. :) I must have messed it up here b/c I copy & pasted it right from my Word document and it's spelled right there. LOL

[AnnW]

it was in the title to the thread not the actual invite. ;)

[littlesista06]

Oooohhhh. :lol: Thanks again, then!
Hee hee. I was searching the invite I'd printed and trying to find my mis-spelling! LOL

[Diane]

Love it... it's perfect!

Remember the Spelling Police? LOL Too funny...

[PamE]

it was in the title to the thread not the actual invite. ;)

It said "bowing" in the title??? :lol: I totally missed it!

[AnnW]

It said "bowing" in the title??? :lol: I totally missed it!


great! i can see other people's typos but not my own! :rolleyes:

[littlesista06]

I'm done and they're printed! (I know, thank goodness, you're sick of hearing about it) LOL


Got time to “spare”?
This may be right up your “ally”…

It’s ______’s Birthday!
She’s turning eleven
February 24, 2007

Meet at our house at nine that night
We’ll go Cosmic Bowling ‘til late in the night
There’s music and black lights and glow in the dark pins
What’s more fun than bowling with friends?!

Then it’s back to our house to get tucked in tight…
We’ll all sleep away what’s left of the night.
Let’s get up late Sunday, then fix some brunch
You can be picked up later, In time for your lunch.

Give us a call, give us a shout
We can’t party without you,
So don’t be left out!

[Mickey]

Oops...it's up your "alley", not "ally".

[littlesista06]

Oops...it's up your "alley", not "ally".

$$$$$$hit!!!
oh well, at least i haven't cut them and sealed 'em or mailed 'em.
y'know, i kept looking at that thinking "that looks more like a girls' name..." lol

thanks mickey :)

[AnnW]

ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!

it sounds fantastic!